Week 1 2/2

Proposal:

I believe my 20 Time Project should be to learn how to knit. Like all repetitive actions, knitting can be soothing, which would be good with my busy schedule. Also, the things I can make could be donated. I could make things like hates, scarfs, socks, mittens. I intend to work my way up to making sweaters for the dogs at the rescue I volunteer for. I could also make stuff for the rescue to sell and raise money.

Feedback:

Wrote "for the rescue" twice in the last sentence

Last sentence- "to sell to raise" to "To sell and raise"

Somethings that I've learned that can help me is my mom has a knitting loom kit that makes it easier to make hats and scarfs. She knows how to make hats and says it's easy to make scarfs even though she hasn’t tried that yet. She says I can make mittens with the loom, however it's a bit harder and she hasn't attempted that yet.